Date: 19.05.2008
Time: 11:57 p.m.
Let us enter a world of swirling motions
Where the people bubble in and out of reveries
Feeling strongly the need of those free notions
To let them rise beyond blue mysteries.
Laughing strongly at colours flying before them
They reach out and feel these with a twitch of the nose
Exuberant they are, as they feel no fear from them
Blending in moods with an artist’s easy pose.
Oh let us explore this realm and lose ourselves in it!
Give in to the allure of the carpet’s reclining chair...
Breathe in winds from distant fancies
Composed concertedly like a symphony in air!
Look about this land, and come, we shall play
This time is ours to hold and mould as we may,
Would it not be a waste to waste away this vision?
With no need of forceful airy unsolicited submission?
Join me as I walk my way through fields that set me free
Sing with me, and sing for me, those charming melodies
Wrap me up in a blanket of leaves from my favourite tree
Kiss the sky hosting a friendly sun and answer to its pleas.
Skip with me and jump with joy at limpid lakes that show
A smiling reflection staring dreamily at a wistful boat
Whistle with the wind that teases waters that can glow
Take me by the hand and upon this we shall float.
End: 00:19 a.m.
5 comments:
this is the most inclusive of your poems!
i have felt you alienate yourself from the reader in your poems (i might be wrong though)
but this one's inviting...
nicely done :)
There is joie de vivre in this ... just what I needed! Thank you!
me = elated .
:)
Oh thank you thank you thank you people! *gushes girlishly*
I feel so grateful and thankful for all the support!!!! *more gushing*
Oh yes, I will be eternally grateful to all of you!!
Ok, wait. I cannot do this anymore. :P It's not me. :P :P :P
So well, here are the replies to the few scanty commentors out there:
BDC: Ah yes, I do alienate people in my poems. It's fun I tell you! You should try it. :)
PianoPoet: I'm really glad to hear that. :) It was basically a "happy poem" to cheer me up before/during the exams. So yes. Glad you liked it.
Sayan: Ah! :)
"Oh thank you thank you thank you people! *gushes girlishly*
I feel so grateful and thankful for all the support!!!! *more gushing*
Oh yes, I will be eternally grateful to all of you!!"
That's not you. It's a watery weather phenomenon. :P
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