Date: 04.07.2007
Time: 00:10 a.m.
Hard, it has been ...
Seething rage had taken over
Boiling anger matched together
Control seemed far away ...
Hard, it has been ...
Salty tears that threatened to fall
Ghostly shadows of smiles forgot
Respite seemed far away ...
Hard, it has been ...
Drops of blood that fell yet stopped
Despair lingering in each that stayed
Release seemed far away ...
Hard, it has been ...
Days long-drawn, hurtful, tense
No bit of joy coursing through veins
Laughter seemed far away ...
I heard the music once again
Chest constricted, emotive tunes I felt
The song rose, emerging once more ...
Breathtaking, beautiful and inspiring
O sweet melody!
Soaring, rising, wafting, searing ...
Painful ecstasy
O sweet melody!
Overwhelming, humbling, piercing, bracing ...
Hard, it has been ...
But victorious I stand
Not to be defeated by scars again
Freedom seems closer now ...
End: 00:30 a..m.
9 comments:
Angsty.. h'm. And wonderfully constructed.
Funny... that would be somewhat like what I'd write. Heh...
Overwhelming, humbling, piercing, bracing ...
Awesome...
awesomely t=you writes you be the greats.
its beautiful...much in need of that optimism!!!
p.s:temme how dya change the comments tag?
Whoa! You are really a compulsive blog-poster, I see. Every other day I find a new post! Hehe. I really love that.
I am very honoured that you thought my post to be funny - that was my first attempt at humour, and believe me, I had lost hope.
Oh, and one more thing, I will warn you from digging too much. People say they feel depressed when they read my stupid rants. Hehe.
I like this piece.
Makes me cheerful.
Its beautiful....my words fail me I guess,but there is an overwhelming power in your poem.
Hmmm...wonderful..the imagery is indeed striking...but i could not get the "Ghostly shadows..." line
@ Dream Baron
Thank ye *bows*
That line you mentioned has a long story behind it...
I'm glad that you pointed it out. :]
@ Shreya
O faithful follower of my journey
How can I thank thee enough?
@ Lucifer
H'm... you need to work on that thing called self-esteem...
And the piece makes me cheerful too. :]
@ BDC
You shall find it.
@ Ship
You are embarrassing me.
@ Kazarelth
That's what music does to me. It's painful, powerful ... yet something I'd rather die than live without, heh.
If the "long" story can be shared that is when you have time and no personal inhibitions...do send it to my mail id...mail2rsen@yahoo.com...The line is really interesting and the history to it must be even better
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