Date: 02.08.2007
Time: 11:50 p.m.
That quiet monster is no longer still
Unfettered and free, it rages
Unbound, it can now lash out
Unrestricted by guilt or fear.
That gnawing guilt is quiescent now
Quelled by anger, it is vanquished
Quieted by truth, it now quails
Quaint, and oddly ... laughable.
The eyes flash dangerously
Deadly, with much animosity
Dizzying, with the surging ague
Daunting and intensely glaring.
The words exchanged convey nothing
They are futile and old
Like the person who uttered them
They are sounds to be abhorred.
That monster is no longer a sorry spectacle
That monster is wiser now
That monster hungers for retribution
That monster is ready to strike.
End: 00:15 a.m.
11 comments:
ineteresting ,very very powerful....
You have chosen excellent words to convey the feelings. Good one..
Monster.
Ah.
Brilliant! Me gonna blogroll ya! ;)
Why don't you tell me that you've blogged?
And... this poem follows a pattern. I love patterns. I very much love patterns.
And... this is... so powerful. It's a sequel, of sorts, to this.
{Yes. Maybe... I am just pondering on the similarities. Forgive me if I said something wrong.}
And... of course, you've seen it. So.. no point clicking that. Heh..
@ Kazarelth
Er ... I forgot?
*Sheepish expression*
Sholly.
And, hmm, come to think of it, it does seem like a sequel.
{Gah. Stuff the apologies when they're not required.}
@ Jellyfish
:D
*Bows*
Thank ye!
@ Lucifer
Ah?
Ah!
@ Alphabets
Thank you. :]
@ Shreya
Thanks for everything.
as always,girl you rocked it!!
good..but excuse me for saying this...i've read better stuff from u...could be better. :|
@ .L.O.S.T.
I know. It could have. :)
Anyway, I'm not making excuses. I had to get something out. I did. So ... it's okay.
Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate the honesty.
@ BDC
Aw. Thank you. You people seriously overrate me. Meh. :P
Monster Inside.... ;-D
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