Thursday, 28 June 2007

Release

Date: 28.06.2007
Time: 00:15 a.m.

When I woke up today
Did you wonder
How far I have come
Away from you?

When I laughed today
Did you wonder
Whether I had won
And defied you?

When I sang today
Did you wonder
Why it was harder
To pull me down?

To that split self
I answer
No
I have survived.

To that split self
I state
Yes
Now, I will fly.

To that split self
I command
Go!
You are banished from my mind!

I have taken all the blows
Bled out all my woes
Barely existed for a while
The ordeal leaving me numb
But now, I will live ... I will soar
And now, you will die.

End: 00:23 a.m.

6 comments:

Lucifer said...

Interestingly, this piece turns out to be a good song. The music to this is also weird.

storyteller said...

split self?we all have one dont we...the good and the bad side,is that what you meant?

Anonymous said...

Good one! Did you actually succeed in banishing the bad or lethargic side??? And yes, I second lucifer. This could be a good song...

Prince K. said...

Heh.. this was quite in tune with the meaning of one of my works.

H'm...

weevil girl said...

...

me loves.

Lucid Darkness said...

@ Ship

Thanks.

@ Kazarelth

I checked that one out. And commented

@ Steelbunz

Well, I was talking about more than just a 'bad' or 'lethargic' side. But yes, I think I have succeeded at what I was trying. I am NOT going back.

@ Shreya

Read above

@ Lucifer

Song? Hmm. Must ponder about that.